The content of the
conclusion depends on the level of your writing. In middle school,
it may simply be a summary or a restatement of the thesis. In senior
high it should restate the thesis and then move to general commentary or
analysis. For example, a literary study of a novel should turn from
analysis of the work to a discussion of the author’s accomplishments.
If the topic is more controversial, the conclusion might express your approval
of one side of the topic, make a judgment, or offer suggestions for further
research or actions. Effective conclusions make a general statement.
Sometimes they compare past or present situations, offer directives or
solutions, or end with a direct quotation. Examples of each of these
methods are presented in Writing Research Papers, Lester.
Following are the
two conclusions from the same high school papers as the sample introductions
found on page III.B.
Sample #1: During
the late nineteenth century the Indian wars escalated, then came to a rapid
finish as the Sioux Indians were lied to, mistreated, and ultimately murdered.
Two events, the Black Hills incident and the Battle at Wounded Knee, show
this mistreatment suffered by the Sioux as whites expanded their territory
westward. Even though a friendly relationship originally existed
between Indians and settlers, it was quickly destroyed by this desire for
new land. Thus, the nineteenth century relations between the American
settlers and the Indians, which began so peacefully, ended sorrowfully
in hostility and tragedy.
Sample #2: These
archetypes of the woman and the hero, as well as the imagery of color and
number, contribute to the interpretations of character and theme in Ernest
Hemingway’s short story, “The Short Happy Life of Francis Macomber.” Certainly
the variety of authors who have employed these universal symbols attests
to their importance. Understanding their use and meaning enables
a reader to more deeply appreciate the scope of a literary work.
Also, since archetypes have been used through time and cultures, the reader
easily sees their influence on fiction over time. It is in the timeless
and universal meanings of these symbols, first seen in ancient legends
and myths, where the reader can find fascinating and almost limitless application
to literature of today.